Saturday, January 02, 2010

non-fiction for 2010


On Ticking Boxes

Patricia Hewitt ‘Rather than discuss the emotional and the individual we speak of what we can measure’
 (on  New Labour government and the arts,
 Radio 4 Today September 2005)


Robert F. Kennedy ‘…yet the Gross National Product does not allow for the health of our children, the quality of their education, or the joy of their play. It does not include the beauty of our poetry or the strength of our marriages…it measures everything, in short, except that which makes life worthwhile….’
(Address to the University of Kansas March 18th 1968)



            Dusk and we were just leaving the late summer gardens. The wasps were at their slow circling worst and the Galloway midges were massing for business. The play we had watched had been provocative and we wanted to talk about it in the shelter of the car, but just at the gate a young man approached us with a pile of forms. ‘Do you mind ?’ he asked. ‘It’s an evaluation. It won’t take a minute.’ He held out a piece of paper, A6 size, with three printed questions and nine boxes. Had we found the play very interesting, interesting or not at all interesting ? Tick box. Had we found the venue very satisfactory, satisfactory or not at all satisfactory ? Tick box. Did we think the ticket price good value, reasonable value or poor value ?  Tick box. I took the young man’s pencil and wrote across the form  If you want to know what I think, ask me, a form of words I had chosen as a response to the evaluation forms distributed like so much waste paper at the end of each of my university courses.
I had been so much angrier then. Whatever had they meant – did I find my lecturer very satisfactory, satisfactory or not satisfactory? – was it not their duty of care to ensure that my lecturers were satisfactory?  More than satisfactory, stimulating, inspiring, informed and communicative but there were no boxes to record these often encountered qualities. We had spent so many hours in understanding the hierarchies of sources of evidence for research purposes it was surprising to encounter this poverty of vocabulary in a university evaluation form.
‘It won’t take a minute’ the young man had said, inferring that the play and my response to it could be expressed and analysed from three ticked boxes with no further effort on anyone’s part. I would argue that it should take much longer than a minute for people who have shared a quality of experience to express their wonder, their praise and their questions, and that we should make time to encourage this exchange. Above all, we could use an expressive vocabulary to capture the complexity of experience, we might move far beyond mere measurement which is fine for counting bums on seats, ice creams sold and the number of cars in the car-park. Numbers are a flat dimension when assessing quality.
Is it then a matter of the zeitgeist when so many qualitative experiences are explained or excused by recourse to measurement ? We have grown used to news broadcasts in which groups of people gather to protest at some closure of a vital local service, stressing the qualitative value of an organisation under threat. They are often followed onto the screen by a spokesman, a measurer who can state categorically that more money has gone into the service, more people are happy with it, more employees are on higher salaries and so on. He will be stating the facts but he is hardly telling the whole truth.
A recent phone-in programme on Radio 4 (You and Yours. March 07) contained a contribution from an ambulance driver who had worked in rural Ayrshire and Argyllshire, expressing deep concern that the depletion of local accident and emergency services in these areas was putting life at risk. Ambulance crews were having to take emergency cases to Glasgow hospitals, journeys lasting several hours, an ordeal for people already in pain, notwithstanding the absence of an ambulance from the area for the duration. The government spokesman responded by saying that there was no higher death rate traceable in patients who had travelled for an hour or more to hospital.  It would take a person of unimpeachable goodness not to quietly hope that one day that spokesman finds himself the victim of a raging earache on the slopes of Ben Yellary.
There may be a connection between this attachment to evaluation, however shallow, and statistical proof that everything is getting better in spite of what ‘the emotional’ and ‘the individual’ have to relate. It may be that this great urge to quantify expresses a loss of trust in empirical testimony, a fear that where we cannot measure human experience, we cannot allow it to shape our judgements. Common sense (another immeasurable quality) tells us that there were numerous excellent teachers and doctors – the most measured of current professions – before measuring became a profession in itself, a profession dedicated to raising standards. Logically, constant improvement should lead to perfection.
However there are those who celebrate the asymptotic nature of such a process. These are the people who maintain trust in human instinct and the immeasurable nature of creative acts. Renowned classical pianist, Artur Schnabel, on being asked to do another take on a recording, demurred, commenting, ‘I might play it better but it won’t be as good.’ This elusiveness and illusionary nature of perfection was noted by Charles Rennie Mackintosh, ‘There is hope in honest error but none in the icy perfection of the mere stylist.’
Our children may come to look back upon this time with curiosity, wondering why our educated and sophisticated society created a stratum of professionals detached from the making and doing that is the health of any society, whose only work was in examining sheets of paper covered with ticked boxes, summarising and analysing the contents and publishing their findings. With good luck and wisdom we might find that they would be examining a temporary, now defunct profession.  

‘The man who makes no mistakes does not usually make anything.’
 E.Phelps .speech at the Mansion House 24 Jan 1899

                            





Saturday, December 26, 2009

New poems for 2010 - Breughel in mind


Cold Snap

Branches, brittle and silvered,
scrape past each other rasping
a hollow song into the still air.
The path through the icy woodland
beckons.


Sunday families walk their kids,
their dogs running,
out and back, out and back.
Laughter and barks split the air,
woollen scarves like flags waving,
A promise of a tea-time treat
drives numb-fingered children on,
the wood hums,
populous as any Breughel painting.


Grey light shrinking,
the wood darkens.
Three day frost, turning
again back from the melt,
building hoar-frost towers,
crystal on crystal.


An owl launches in silence
the moment before,
with gunshot bedlam,
the branch snaps.  


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Dogs crossing The Meadows


All the long summer days,
through the ad hoc cricket games,
avoiding the dipping Frisbies,
dogs make solo dashes
across the Breughel Meadows.


Big dogs, city stifled,
quiver at ‘Stay!’
Backsides trembling,
ears and tail skywards,
drinking in the acreage.


Small dogs, city flat size,
feeling a dreamed wild
radiating from
rat-size paws, yelp in fear
and/or bravado.


At dusk, under orange lamplight,
Marchmont maidens and widows
converge with Westies and Yorkies
for a last feel of the fading day,
their solo tracks never touching.


All the short winter days
on snow expanses pocked
with paw marks, dogs trot,
and owners follow their tracks,
with lead, nibbles and plastic bag.














Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Greenwich International Early Music Exhibition 2009


Alison Crum and Friends
Roy Marks,Jan Zahourek, Ruth Fraser
(Ali Kinder not in photo)

Richard and I took our set of viols and everything else that goes with them to Greenwich in early November where we set up our 'music room' and prepared for three days of renaissance viol playing. In between the playing we performed(along with Vickie Hobson and Linda Hill) at a masterclass in St Alfege Church with our teacher, Alison Crum and then Alison and Friends( Roy Marks,Jan Zahourek,Ali Kinder and Ruth Fraser) played a recital on them of music for Henry VIII - called 'Very Perfect' - in the Admiral's Room. It's such a lovely thing to spend time with players of all abilities, with lots or little experience and watch them discover the special sound of Richard's viols on the music they were designed to play. He now has a three to four year waiting list for these instruments.......


Masterclass with Alison Crum at St Alfege's, Greenwich
Vickie Hobson, Linda Hill and me
(Richard taking photograph)





Vivien and Friends in our Skittle Alley 'music room'
(Ali Kinder, who played in the recital and two young viol players
from Warwickshire, one of them managing a very large viol)

Thursday, October 22, 2009

Change of poems for Autumn 2009

Thunderhead Day

Thirty miles of visibility
makes a window onto

the shining estuary and
black mountains beyond
with charcoal piles of cloud,
lit through with lightning,
lightening themselves by
shedding white sheets of rain.


Oh we are children again,
safe in the car watching,
secretly fearful that
the thunder will come close
and we will wet ourselves.






At The Edge

Pulsing up this mud expanse
in curved increments,
thin lace edged water

belies its parentage.
Its innocent bubbles
bear no relation
to the thrash and roar
of its deeper self,
where bubbles fly
in winds that scoop
them from wavetops,
spreading spume streamers
down the sides of waves.

Even now, under a sky
teeming with electronic life,
busy as the seas,
fishermen’s women
stand by the quiet frills
of oceans, gazing out
to where the cumulus
winds up its fury.

To them,
a piece of driftwood
spinning in the tide,
reports a broken ship,
a lost lover, a stolen son.